This Duchess of Mine by Eloisa James
Reviewed by Stacey Agdern
Publisher: Avon
5 Stars
I’m not sure of the responsible party, but whoever decried the prologue as a literary device is responsible for an epidemic of misguided flashbacks. Scenes beyond scenes that alter an author’s trajectory can make a reader feel disoriented if not entirely seasick.
Well used flashbacks can be a wonderful illustrative tool, but too many of them suggests the need for a larger fix. For some authors, the answer might involve splitting the story into two parts-the before and the after. For others, the problem might be solved with a prologue. At bare minimum, it’s crucial that the author pays attention to the reader’s ability to follow the story, because, quite simply, a reader won’t adore what they can’t follow.
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